I chose my tradition paper to be the one that I revise. I worked so hard on this paper and I wanted to make sure that I gave my audience reasons why the television as an innovation has affected children in a negative way. I forgot the main point of writing this paper, and that main point is how a modern innovation affects tradition.
I do not want to change my whole paper because I worked so hard on it, but I think adding a paragraph on why the television can affect tradition would be good, so I will add it to the closing paragraph of my paper.
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